[for Dixie]
i am
skeptical of
words that start
with ‘re’.
they stand
there all
full of
assumptions-
return
remain
recover
repeat
all suggestions
that the mark
was missed a
first time
or that
there is a
place to go
back to
or that I
could have
chosen
otherwise.
but what of
the effort
taken to get
here?
I just
won’t accept
any words
that suggest
a life can
only be lived
forwards
by
undoing.
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The ending lines here- “I just/ won’t accept /any words/ that suggest/ a life can/ only be lived/ forwards/ by/ undoing.” – capture something that I want to keep thinking about. Interestingly, I almost wrote “return to” but, for maybe the first time, caught the “re” and thought “no, I want to keep going forward with this idea, not go back to it.”
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